I use quotes at the start of all my stories. I think they're a great way to set the mood. What you've done here with them, though, is even better - because they're actually part of the story and you've used them to create something new, which is very interesting. Also, "My eyes licked every sentence twice..." - that line is fantastic! 😎
I use quotes at the start of all my stories. I think they're a great way to set the mood. What you've done here with them, though, is even better - because they're actually part of the story and you've used them to create something new, which is very interesting. Also, "My eyes licked every sentence twice..." - that line is fantastic! 😎
thanks chris! ! it was a fun device to play with here….making the words have a spirit of their own … clarice has a special tendency to do that -