I’m writing a new draft of my novel by hand and took photos of all the pages so far last night - here’s what I made after the notes app told me how it thought Page 22 & 36 read when I copy and pasted it into text (+ voice recordings because :8
Page 22 draft 3
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" Yes Aviema'am yes ma'am. "
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but So I not I
there in my brothers lobby, keep talking
Page 36 draft 3
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This might be Finnegans Wake
where the cooli Atti, that’s exactly right